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Post by [Blood] on Dec 10, 2014 16:45:16 GMT -6
The messenger smiles really wide showing off his teeth and lunges forward as fast as he can, jumping a little bit to get momentum, sword first.
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Post by ReoEyeGhast on Dec 10, 2014 16:46:33 GMT -6
The Leader Steps out of the way and Attempts to stab the Messenger in the back
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Post by [Blood] on Dec 10, 2014 16:47:50 GMT -6
He looks up at the ceiling. The messenger hold the sword upside down and stabs you behind him.
"For... Frachland..."
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Post by [Rainbowlicious] on Dec 10, 2014 16:49:21 GMT -6
Aaaaand I've seen some godmod!
FIX THE ERROR.
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Post by ReoEyeGhast on Dec 10, 2014 16:51:36 GMT -6
The Leader pulls a deep Breath and says "(Cough) Luckily i Survived that (Coughs Twice)" the Leader Yells "I need Medical Help!!!!"
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Post by [Rainbowlicious] on Dec 10, 2014 16:55:21 GMT -6
It's not against the rules but I highly recommend you never to dictate the actions of a character that is not yours to control.
You do not stab someone, you attempt to stab them.
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Post by [Blood] on Dec 10, 2014 16:56:38 GMT -6
<In the event of both the characters' deaths, the RP is closed.> <<RP FINISHED>>
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Post by [Admin] on Dec 10, 2014 17:05:53 GMT -6
Hello highlordfordring,To better insure that the Commuverse remains a place for enjoyment, and to keep the spawn of the underworld from uprising within our board, I would like to ask you to familiarize yourself with our rules, which can be found here.
The application process is currently not clearly defined, but we request that you make or join a roleplay in the Application Roleplay section before applying. When applying, please give us the following: [b]Previous RP Experience (include evidence that the user is you):[/b] [b]What makes you stand out:[/b] [b]Strong suits in Roleplaying:[/b] [b]Weak suits in Roleplaying:[/b] [b]What faction/character do you plan to play:[/b] [b]Links to one or more Commuverse Roleplays you've taken part in:[/b] Please post the application in a new thread here, and when you feel you've conducted enough Roleplay to be evaluated. Some tips/suggestions, from observing your Roleplay:Please try to use the best grammar, spelling, and overall language ability that you can. Everybody makes mistakes, but the better written the language is, the easier it is to understand. Please try to make your posts longer. Add more detail (though don't go overboard), and try to get into the habit of writing at least a full paragraph (5-8 sentences) or more per post. Punctuation, such as quotation marks (" ") around dialogue (what people say) makes it much clearer to understand when somebody is talking and when they are not. Try to avoid Roleplay that goes against what has already been done, or is simply just overpowering or unfair. The point is not to win, but to have fun (and trust me when I say that losing can be fun if you make it). The fairer it is, the more fun everybody has. Roleplays shouldn't have a hard end. For most, if not all role plays, the end should either be a smooth ending where everybody involved roleplays their leaving/goodbyes/pulling out and leaves it at that. That is, if an ending comes at all. The length should also be much longer, because events that are over in just a few minutes aren't really worth roleplaying.
For now, I would take part in more roleplays on the Application section to get a feel for things. We hope to see your application when you're ready.
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